Business Flyer what do you think?

[Rainforest Adventures]

I just made up a new business flyer tonight. It's very different from the cartoony one for kids. This one's more geared for 10 years & up.

What do you guys think?

[shaz82]

i like it a lot. The only thing i would do a little different is move jessie the lorry (right name?) to a slightly different spot or move the word variaty over to the left a little so they arent so close. Lol but that may be just me,

[peachee]

i like it a lot. The only thing i would do a little different is move jessie the lorry (right name?) to a slightly different spot or move the word variaty over to the left a little so they arent so close. Lol but that may be just me,

I was gonna say the exact same thing. It's a great photo but he cuts into the wording a bit. Also, maybe make the Rainforest Adventures at the top a big bolder so it stands out? Looks great otherwise.

[Rainforest Adventures]

Thanks Shannon and Lisa ! I thought the same thing but, just wanted a second opinion. The changes have been made to the original.

[Jojo's zoo]

I really really like it. I especially like that one of Jessie doing the splits! Silly boy. Anyway much more eyecatching than the other one, to my mind. But I'm also not under 10

[2tiels4now]

Hi Morgan,

Have you thought of adding a phone number to the flyer? Just a thought for those poor souls that don't have internet <grin>

Other than that, I agree about moving Jesse further from the text.

Nice looking flyer though. I really like the leafy background. Very fitting :o)

Deb

[2cay2]

The leaf background is fantastic. It really makes the flyer 'pop'.

Personally I would not have the web addy in bold, or I would make it smaller. I feel the eye is drawn to it a little more than anything else, which I don't think is necessary. This (IMO) should be reserved for something that will make people want to read more. Like for instance Live Parrot Display This would grab peoples attention straight away.

[Rainforest Adventures]

Hi Morgan,

Have you thought of adding a phone number to the flyer? Just a thought for those poor souls that don't have internet <grin>

Other than that, I agree about moving Jesse further from the text.

Nice looking flyer though. I really like the leafy background. Very fitting :o)

Deb

I thought about that but, I've put up other ads before and have had "Crazies" call my house not interested in the presentations at all. One person started talking to me about their life and everything that was going wrong in it('NUTS").
Plus if they go to the website the phone number is there.

[Rainforest Adventures]

The leaf background is fantastic. It really makes the flyer 'pop'.

Personally I would not have the web addy in bold, or I would make it smaller. I feel the eye is drawn to it a little more than anything else, which I don't think is necessary. This (IMO) should be reserved for something that will make people want to read more. Like for instance Live Parrot Display This would grab peoples attention straight away.

I thought about that too but, I know when I'm in a hurry I try and get the just of it and go. It's kind of like subliminal advertising. They see the name RAINFOREST ADVENTURES in bold and then see www. rainforestadventures .ca and it sticks with them so, if their sitting at work or on their computer at home they might think of checking it out. Bwahahaha! I'm an evil genius!

[2cay2]

I thought about that too but, I know when I'm in a hurry I try and get the just of it and go. It's kind of like subliminal advertising. They see the name RAINFOREST ADVENTURES in bold and then see www. rainforestadventures .ca and it sticks with them so, if their sitting at work or on their computer at home they might think of checking it out. Bwahahaha! I'm an evil genius!

Aaahhhh............. Evil genius indeed

[Roscoe's Mom]

Gee. Now I want to go on a rainforest adventure. Guess I'll have to move to Canada, huh?

[sweetytweety]

its a great flyer ,...very eye catching

maybe include commas before and after 'of course'

hahah this comes from someone who rarely punctuates ! but some folks are really funny about punctuation so u might as well impress everybody especially if its an educational program
good luck with ur venture